Saturday, April 26, 2008

Revision 3 explanation

I revised the poem to start it on the path to final polishing (hopefully). I added a 4th grouping which is pretty nifty, If I may add. And there is also alot of language tweaking going on. It's starting to come together nicely. As the next step, I might try and add a refrain to the end of each stanza.

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